“Come into my parlour”, said the spider to the fly
For many years the moon bloomed
Rooted to festering alluvial soil
That sprouted slick lazy snakes.
The moon spent its time
Trying and crying for the sun
To caress her and kiss her
Trying always to lock lips
With those yellow teeth
Those yellow, yellow eyes.
When people saw the moon’s scars
They thought they saw an old man.
They saw it all right, it was him
Of course. But no one knew
That old, old man.
The sun rose everyday.
Every morning that began with him
Made the moon hide beneath the soil,
Curled in the labyrinthine folds
Of snakes- those thick, thick
Umbilical cords.
The sun terrified her.
Without the sun, she wouldn’t shine.
It was a humiliated moon that rose at night
Waxing and waning every month
Disappearing into nothingness.
No such thing happened with the sun.
It went on shining dutifully
Uncaring and unaware of its heat
Burning scars onto her face.
The moon hid its shame
Amongst creatures that crawled with
Their bellies in the dust.
The moon rearranged its scars
To make a funny old man.
And still when it looked at itself
It saw his imprint, a slap, on her face.
Thursday, May 1, 2008
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4 comments:
Unfulfilled dreams forcing a person into reclusion and solitude. And yet too proud to let others know that it hurts. Or may be too skeptical that they will laugh. Trying to joke around to reflect a happy image. But deep inside happiness is an emotion left behind pre-puberty.
That's what i gathered from this poem. I always thought your poetry resembled Emily's...both in style and metaphor. This could have been almost autobiographical had it been written by her. But then again, may be I'm looking too far. This is gthe story of almost every individual. Great work! Whether I got it all wrong or got just a part of it, I enjoyed it just as much. That's what matters to me. I'm not a literary critic to sit down and break cryptic metaphors.
And hey, you haven't been to my blog for a while. And what have ya been upto? I had seen a miss call from your ghty number but too low on balance to call back...
i won't say too much because words will diffuse the concept. i will say this - by far one of your best works! brought tears to my eyes.. and i could relate to it(don't know if i am happy about that or not)..it was simply beautiful. the journey to greatness has begun!
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